Hui Shuai Jiao De Xiong Mao
Chapter 2 End of Volume Summary
Frankly, this volume gave me a lot of confidence, not only because I completed the daily ten thousand words flag for a month during the Nagano arc, but also because the results were improving.
The biggest difficulty for online novel authors should be finding the right path amidst the "voices of criticism"...
Although I get scolded by the intern every day.
However, the rising results proved that I don't need to pay too much attention to these voices.
The road is still long, let's take it slowly.
Looking back after finishing the second volume, I found that I have a writing habit, which is paying too much attention to the "introduction, development, turn, and conclusion" between two stories.
I often write several transition chapters very unwisely after a climax ends.
For me, this is not easy to write, and it takes time to ensure sufficient emotion in each chapter.
For readers, this may not be good enough, because they don't see the substantial advancement of the plot, and subscriptions will show a real-time decline.
But for the story...this is very important.
Ups and downs, gatherings and separations, all need to be compared. What I want to write is not just a story of "the protagonist getting stronger." At least in my heart, in Nagano, there is a group of people who are busy running around for their own affairs every day.
The novel will be very good if it is more compact.
The novel is a little slower, but it's not that bad either.
The last chapter of this volume is called "About Life, About Death".
What Gu Shun and Chu Ling said, these things about life and death...are actually explorations of the meaning of the existence of "Jingtu."
After the cemetery, the climax gradually subsided.
I never thought that the second volume would end like this.
In the original final chapter, there were actually many plots of "going south." I made a lot of deletions to this. Perhaps if my results were better, I would choose to add these plots that I prefer arbitrarily.
The next volume is called "The Traveler".
This is a more interesting volume name than "Jingtu." I have made a lot of detailed outlines early on, and I still need to sort them out carefully. However, there will be a major promotion on the website tomorrow, so I will not take a leave of absence. I hope everyone can support me with monthly tickets~
Compared with the second volume, the plot of the third volume will be more compact and intense.
Also, thank you for your comments in this chapter. This is really my biggest motivation. I hope the comments in the next volume can break a hundred tAt~